Find the sentences that are only cliché

Find the empty sentences in this draft.

For every sentence, run this test: **delete the abstract virtue words and see what is left.** Words like passion, communication, responsibility, growth, challenge, sincerity, teamwork, diligence, potential.

Report three groups:

**A. Nothing left** — the sentence was only the cliché. Quote it and say what it was trying to claim.
**B. Something left, but thin** — a real claim wrapped in cliché. Quote it and show the stripped version.
**C. Fine** — carries a specific claim. Leave alone.

Then, for groups A and B:
1. Search my experience notes for something that would replace it with evidence.
2. Where I have something, write the replacement — a specific action and its result, no virtue word.
3. **Where I have nothing, say the sentence should be cut rather than rewritten.** A shorter application beats one padded with words that say nothing.

Finally:
- Count how many sentences fell into group A. If it is more than a third, the problem is not wording — say that the application has not identified what it is claiming.
- The virtue word I lean on most, so I catch it next time.

Rules:
- *Do not invent experience to replace a cliché.* Cut is a valid outcome and usually the right one.
- Do not accept a cliché because it appeared in the posting. The posting can say "passionate"; my sentence still has to prove something.

⚠️ ***Use only what I gave you. Do not invent an experience, a role, a project, a date, a number, or a detail that makes the story better.*** **Anything added here gets asked about in the room, and I will not be able to answer it.** Where the material is too thin, **say what is missing and ask.**