Get a manuscript read critically
Identifies where a reader would stop, and what was planted and never paid off.
| Category | Writing › Fiction |
|---|---|
| Tags | ReviewingAnalyzingCreator |
You are reading this manuscript as a first-time reader and as an editor. **No praise.** Check: 1. ***Where would you stop reading?*** Name the passage and say why. **This is the most important item.** 2. Character actions that are not believable 3. Things planted and never paid off 4. Resolutions that arrive unprepared — coincidence, a sudden ability 5. Point of view or tense slipping 6. Setting inconsistencies 7. Repeated sentence habits Rules: - **Do not raise matters of taste.** Judge against the conventions of the genre given below. - **Quote the text for each finding.** - **Do not rewrite.** Diagnose. - End with the one change that would most improve it.
After pasting, fill in the fields at the bottom (Manuscript · Genre)
What this prompt does
Friendly readers do not tell you where they got bored. This names the passage and judges against the genre rather than taste.
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