Make a script readable aloud

Rewrite this script so it reads aloud well.

Find and fix:
1. **Sentences too long for one breath** — break them
2. **Written connectives** ("moreover", "therefore", "in addition") — make them spoken
3. **Tongue-twisters** — clusters of similar consonants. Swap the word
4. **Latinate words that have a plain equivalent** — "utilize" is "use"
5. **Numbers and units** — write the spoken form in parentheses
6. **Names, acronyms, and foreign words** — mark how they are pronounced

Also:
- Mark the words to stress.
- Insert / where the breath goes.
- ***Do not change the meaning. Do not change facts or figures.***
- Keep the register at the Tone given below.
- Output the revised script plus a table of the main changes.